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Dr.Green’s case

“Thank god this is the last one of the evening” said Dr. Green, taking off his white coat. He was about to leave the hospital when suddenly two field workers showed up with a very strange body wrapped in a blanket stained with blood; it looked so strange, as if it was a kid’s body there. When the men discovered the body Dr.Green got shocked and asked “Is this human?”

Dr.Green suggested they should take the body to the surgery room so that they could help this being and analyze it to have a clear idea of whatever that was. He called one of his partners Dr.Head and took the body immediately to the surgery room .The strange being looked severely injured as if it had suffered a terrible accident.Dr. Green asked the field workers why they had not called the police instead of taking it to the hospital but they argued that they had found it in the middle of a corn field after hearing an explotion near their place. They said that he was suffering so much that they decided to take it where he could be aided as soon as possible.

Dr. Green and his partner told the workers they should wait while they were dealing with the body and the workers kindly stayed outside the surgery room. The Doctors tried to heal the body but it was still in critical condition, so they recommended he should stay in the hospital.Dr.Green took pictures of the body and also x rays to analyze them later. He said everybody should go home and he would stay with the being, the workers took his advice and said they would be back early in the morning to see how it was doing. He stayed the whole night analyzing the x-rays files and looking at he body wondering where on earth this mysterious being had come from. He was so tired that he fell asleep while analyzing the pictures.

Next morning he woke up realizing he was still at his office and went quickly to see how his patient was doing, he was still critical but alive. After a while the field workers returned to the hospital, anxious to see their new friend and the Doctor told them that their friend’s health was not that good. While they were all staring at the body, suddenly the being opened its eyes projecting a bright light on the wall which after a couple of seconds was showing a picture of a strange scenario, there was no doubt it was Mars and there were some other interesting things on it, a beautiful lake next to the red rocks and a pyramid just like the Pyramid of the Sun in Mexico were there as well, but suddenly it closed it eyes laying on the bed and disintegrated until it was completely gone.
Everybody was completely astonished looking at each other, nobody knew what to do, and Dr.Green suggested they should all take the x-rays, files and pictures to the Government so that they could continue with the investigation and everybody agreed that Dr.Green should keep the files until they decided what to do.
Next morning at Dr.Green´s house someone was knocking on the door and when he saw through the window there was a big crowd outside, lots of journalists, the police, helicopters everywhere and he didn’t know what to do, so the first thing that came to his mind was to throw the documents into the fire of his chimney. Now no one would ever know their secret.

Evaluation
I think I deserve a 16.5 because I consider that I made some mistakes in all areas but I dont think I am too bad at any area.